这段英文写得相当不错，逻辑清晰，专业性强。优化主要旨在提升其流畅度、学术正式感和表达的简洁性。
1. 综合优化版 此版本在保留全部技术细节的基础上，通过使用更精炼、专业的学术词汇（如“poses a significant challenge”）和更紧凑的句式结构，全面提升了文本的流畅度和正式感。
Real-time monitoring of carbon dioxide (CO₂) in automotive exhaust is essential for reducing carbon emissions. However, the inherent chemical stability of CO₂ poses a significant challenge to its accurate and efficient detection, particularly under the demanding conditions of an exhaust system. To address this, we present an intelligent CO₂ sensing technology based on gas discharge ionization. This approach utilizes non-thermal plasma (NTP) to efficiently convert CO₂ into highly reactive carbon monoxide (CO), which is then detected by a high-performance yttria-stabilized zirconia (YSZ)-based electrochemical CO sensor. The sensor features a Bi₂Mn₄O₁₀ sensing electrode (SE) and an Mn-based reference electrode (RE), providing exceptional selectivity and sensitivity for monitoring CO₂ in vehicle exhaust. A detailed analysis confirms the strong electrochemical affinity of Bi₂Mn₄O₁₀ for CO, significantly enhancing the sensor’s durability and detection accuracy under dynamic operating conditions. The integration of NTP-assisted CO₂ conversion with the Bi₂Mn₄O₁₀-based sensor results in a robust and precise system, even in challenging environments. Furthermore, we developed a portable device for real-time CO₂ monitoring that seamlessly combines the NTP chamber with the electrochemical sensor. This device demonstrates outstanding detection performance and real-time tracking capability, offering a highly promising solution for the remote and continuous monitoring of vehicular CO₂ emissions.
2. 精炼紧凑版 此版本追求极致的简洁与力度，通过省略部分修饰语、合并句子和使用更强动词（如“enables”, “yields”），使行文更紧凑有力，适合摘要或海报等空间有限的场景。
Real-time monitoring of automotive exhaust CO₂ is crucial for emission control, yet its chemical inertness complicates detection. We introduce an intelligent sensing technology that employs non-thermal plasma (NTP) to convert CO₂ into reactive CO, which is then quantified by a high-performance YSZ-based electrochemical sensor featuring a Bi₂Mn₄O₁₀ sensing electrode. This material’s strong affinity for CO ensures high selectivity, sensitivity, and durability under dynamic conditions. The synergy between NTP conversion and the Bi₂Mn₄O₁₀ sensor yields a robust and accurate system. We validated this with a portable device that integrates both components, demonstrating exceptional real-time performance for continuous remote monitoring of vehicle CO₂ emissions.
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