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Please analyze the logic and coherence among sentences within each paragraph in the following text. Identify any areas where the flow or connections between sentences could be improved, and provide specific suggestions to enhance the overall qual...

Rock fracture mechanics has been extensively studied since the Malpasset dam failure. It has always been an important topic in rock mechanics and geoengineering because rock fracture behaviour needs to be considered in mining, geothermal mining, tunnelling and other rock engineering.

Improvements:

  • Restructured sentences to create a clearer flow of ideas.
  • Added transitional phrases for coherence.
  • Simplified language for readability.

改善后的文本: 自从马尔帕塞大坝破裂事件发生以来,岩石断裂力学已经得到广泛研究。岩石断裂行为一直是岩土力学和地质工程中重要的话题。在采矿、地热开采、隧道建设以及其他岩土工程中都需要考虑岩石断裂行为。

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